Brea’s Crossing
I’ve written a short story.
In the process of creating a fantasy setting for my roleplaying system LORE, I’ve been playing with a lot of world-building elements: cosmology, racial influences on culture, magic, spirits, and the like. A great way for me to get a feel for these elements and how they fit together is to write a story about them.
This story is called “Brea’s Crossing,” and it’s about the dangers of caravan travel, dueling, and leylines. Let me know what you think in the comments to this post. I’ll likely be releasing more stories in the future.
Tags: brea, lore fantasy, my writing, short story
That was really cool. I like the Leyline. My only criticism, if it really even is one, is to describe the environment around them a bit more.
I’m a fan. So’s the folklorist I’m kinda/sorta dating. She said the cultural allusions seemed authentic and that she would read more if you wrote it. As always, I like your strong but subtle characterization and disregard for “traditional” gender roles. Looking forward to more!
Bloody fantastic. I’d read as much more of this as you could put together.
Very nice. I’m interested to read more stories set in this world.